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The Scholar's avatar

ooh a cliffhanger. I need to know what happens next.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

You've cut down your text word count from previous week. Very different writing too. I don't know if you want any feedback... you'll get some. I loved the Monkey! Loved it. So well written, and unexpected. The judge and the briefcase did not make sense to me. I cannot pinpoint. The Wallpaper too I really liked. I was wondering, if it would work without the last sentence about the lights going out.

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